WHO AM I?: Identity Poetry Anthology Version 2.0
Jaime Groeller and Ivy Waite- Grade 9 Humanities
The biggest change we made to this unit was the rubric. The previous rubric was much too comprehensive, and we have learned a lot about effective and efficient assessment over the last two years together that we were able to streamline the rubric for this version of the project. Furthermore, we did not “give” the rubric to the students this time around; instead, we provided them with mini-lessons and guidance on the process of creating their anthology, allowing for multiple opportunities for questions, conversations, and formative feedback. We then had a conversation near the middle of the project about what they thought should be assessed based on the learning and exploration that was happening. Students were easily able to identify what should be, and would be, assessed. Individual check-ins during which we sat down for a few minutes with each student along the way also contributed to this understanding of expectations.
As always, the power of the project was most obvious in the words of the students themselves. Their written poems often blew us away, and we caught glimpses of aspects of our students that we might never have seen. Their reflections on the project were also intriguing, and almost every student included at least one enduring understanding about the power of poetry to communicate deeply.
As part of our reflection on the project, we asked the students: “What are 3 enduring understandings you will take away from this project?” Their answers were illuminating.
“I learned the difference between different literary terms, I realized new ways to write about my identity (writing a quick thing about who I think I am, and just looking at that, sometimes its just even doodles) and realizing that it takes more time to review and make better, than it does to actually make.”
“1. Your identity is more about your likes and dislikes, but how those likes and dislikes affect you.2. Quality is not only important, but can create a tone that a reader can instantly like or dislike. 3. A poem may have a certain face value, but its meaning and literary elements count more.”
“Writing poems isn’t that bad and it can be quite fun to make random ones on the go.Collaborating with peers can be very helpful when you don’t understand what to do.Always plan ahead.”
“1. Always try and hit for the Goldilocks zone2. Focus on creating a meaningful piece that is both short and concise3. Poetry takes along time to write because of the emotion and thought you have to pour into it”
“Understanding of my identity Being able to dig deeper in poems Being able to find and identify poetic elements and incorporate them in my writing”
“I guess I did learn a lot about myself in this project so one will be connecting writing to myself, so whenever I’m reading per say a book, I could connect it more to myself. That would be the first one. The second one would be learning to understand poetry. I think this could be important so that I can better understand poetry. I can point at a poem and say “oh it’s a sonnet,” which I think is a pretty cool skill to have. The third understanding is surprisingly how much names matter. I didn’t really understand about the deepness of names before the vignette assignment.”
“1: What a theme truly is2: How identity is a much bigger topic than it seems3: How beautiful poetry can be, and also how much it can mean to some people.”
“how to make a poem how to read a poem how to dig into my identity”
“I learned a lot about myself that I did not know initially: After thinking and analyzing about how the poems I created and chose linked to my deeper identity, I realized that identity does not really have any borders. Nearly everything about an individual can be identified by understanding their identity and almost everything affects identity, therefore it is a very broad topic.”
We invite you to explore some exemplars of our students’ work! You will see that we challenged the students to communicate with words, as well as visuals. Many chose to create their own images by drawing or using digital tools such as Photoshop or Illustrator, while others used their own photographs. Others searched the internet for images that would help them communicate even more than just through their poetry.